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    Yeni bir essay kontrolü yapar mısınız ?

    Selamun aleykum. Arkadaşlar 'okuma yazma dersi' hocamız bir essay ödevi daha verdi. Rica etsem bu denemenin de kontrolünü yapar mısınız? Şimdiden teşekkürler... Umarım siz de istifade edersiniz... Konu: ''Türkiye'deki eğitim sorunları ve çözümleri''

    Education is one of the most significant matter for the development of a country. Commonly, If the majority of people are ignorant in a country, this country naturally falls behind and the others inevitably attempt to exploit them. Unfortunately, although most of people are educated in Turkey, they can't contribute to improve the country because of the wrong education system. This essay will examine why Turkey's education system is faulty and what the goverment should do.

    To start with, the rate of literate people in Turkey is pretty high. But they can't be effective enough in the business life because until they graduate, they have had to take lessons which are unrelated to their professions. To solve this problem, the goverment should change the system completely. After primary school, children should be tested to learn what their capabilites are. If a child is prone to medicine, it should be stopped teaching him geography or philosophia. Following, teachers should go on training this child in something relevant to his future job. In this way, this child will be educated about his profession for nearly 12 years. After he graduates from the university, he will be expert in medicine and will be a real doctor. Thus, not only the quality of working people but also their contribution to the improvement of the country will increase.

    Another problem of Turkey's education system is discipline. Especially in high schools, discipline is very big problem. Teens often begin smoking, drinking alcohol, using drugs, or playing computer games for hours in this period of their lives. These bad addictions prevent children from fulfilling their responsibilities. They can't study their lessons thoroughly. To get rid of this trouble, the minister of education should take more serious measures. For example, students may be tested periodically whether they smoke or drink alcohol becuase these addictions affect their social and school life. And teachers could often communicate with the parents of the students to learn how much time the students spend with playing,studying,sleeping. Thus, the rate of addicting to bad things among the students will be decreased and they will have to get accustomed to regular and disciplined life.

    Lastly, there is one more problem with our education which is coeducation. Coeducation means that boys and girls study together. Especially secondary and high school, coeducation affects student profoundly. To give an example, teenagers are more prone than adults to fall in love. And there is a reality that not all of them can explain their feelings to person whom they love. It leads them to have some physological problems like nervousness, anger,rebelliousness. Therefore, they can't focus on their reponsibilities and they usually feel unhappy. To solve this problem, making only one change is enough: dividing the buildings into two parts. Thus, children's mind will not be occupied by emotional problems.

    In conclusion, it is not enough that most of the population are educated for the development of a country. For a real progress, students must be raised up meticulously by their parents and teachers from childhood to age of graduation from the university. They must be informed about all bad addictions and kept away from them. Their minds should be held clear, not filled by unnecessary information. As a result, they will be qualified employee not ones who work only for salary.


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    Ve Aleykum Selam
    Yazdıkça yollayın hocam. Bunları Türkçe'ye çevirerek çalışıyorum ben de.

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    Alıntı Abdurrahman. isimli üyeden alıntı Mesajı göster
    Ve Aleykum Selam
    Yazdıkça yollayın hocam. Bunları Türkçe'ye çevirerek çalışıyorum ben de.
    inşaallah kardeşim, ödev verildikçe yazıyorum

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