Tam Sürüm Bilgini Göster : gmat sentence corrections 2


Ehveniser
10th July 2006, 11:58
2) The president of the Women's Freedom Association tried to convince her peers they should join forces to prevent discrimination in the workplace rather than continuing to be underpaid.

(A) they should join forces to prevent discrimination in the workplace rather than continuing to be underpaid.
(B) that they should join forces to prevent discrimination in the workplace rather than continue to be underpaid.
(C) about joining forces to prevent discrimination in the workplace instead of continuing to be underpaid.
(D) for the joining of forces to prevent discrimination in the workplace rather than continue to be underpaid.
(E) to join forces to prevent discrimination in the workplace rather than continuing to be underpaid.

réguler
10th July 2006, 12:15
B is correct.

Ehveniser
10th July 2006, 16:20
sure :)
Choice B is correct. The error in the original sentence is faulty parallelism. Only Choice B has both elements in the same form, "join rather than continue". Choice C is incorrect because it uses the incorrect phrase "convince about".

Gymnopédies
10th July 2006, 16:37
Dear ehveniser;
I'm learning lots of significant information thanks to your worthy questions.That's way thanks.But as you know that there's a problem.:) If you give us the questions of the answer later, we're going to learn so important things.

Thank you so much again.:)

Ehveniser
10th July 2006, 16:40
:) dear Gökhan, please help me about the time, for example, when should I give the correct answer after asking the question? you know, I'm a new comer and have to learn a lot of things. thans in advance..

Gymnopédies
10th July 2006, 16:48
:) dear Gökhan, please help me about the time, for example, when should I give the correct answer after asking the question? you know, I'm a new comer and have to learn a lot of things. thans in advance..


Estağfirullah dear ehveniser:) When you ask a question, you'd better wait five or six member's comment.However, both you and we're going to learn in this forum:)

Thanks again.:)May it be easy!

Ehveniser
10th July 2006, 16:57
maybe I need to rethink about my expectations :)
I haven't thought this title (gmat) takes much interest.
wait and see :)
thanks for your advice!

Gymnopédies
10th July 2006, 17:17
maybe I need to rethink about my expectations :)
I haven't thought this title (gmat) takes much interest.
wait and see :)
thanks for your advice!


You're much welcome...:)

HakanOzbek
17th July 2006, 20:25
2) Choice B is correct. The error in the original sentence is faulty parallelism. Only Choice B has both elements in the same form, "join rather than continue". Choice C is incorrect because it uses the incorrect phrase "convince about".