Tam Sürüm Bilgini Göster : for icyseden :)


AnGel
10th September 2007, 20:57
While the Microsoft Company is planning or hoping to build a factory, the government is thinking about building a hospital in the neighbourhood. Although a factory would give jobs and bring more money and new business to the neighbourhood. I believe a hospital is the better choice.

A hospital in our neighbourhood would save lives because in an emergecy time is important. As an example, a heart attack victim would not be likely to survive an hours drive to the nearest hospital. A hospital would also provide many jobs at various levels of education , from doctors to gardeners.At the same time since health is so important , the hospital could provide health education to parents , children and those with treatable illnesses.

Hospitals are in a way factories, they do not produce merchandise but rather they hope to produce ‘wellness’ or healthy people from sick people. I believe more diverse jobs would be helped if a hospital was built rather than a factory in our neighbourhood.

It's written as an answer to the question '' Do you prefer a Microsoft Company or a hospital in your neighbourhood''

I’ve simply explained my ideas on this issue.If you have something to add here you are ;)

PS:If I have mistakes please correct me ;)

Ruthless
10th September 2007, 22:08
If there is an only person who write such a beautiful passage , most probably , it should be AnGeL :D

Thanks for ur sharing :)

AnGel
10th September 2007, 22:20
Not that much but thank you for the comment :)

IcySeden
12th September 2007, 17:26
thanks my dear honey :hug: it's good to see you spare your time for writing.keep on:stretch:

AnGel
12th September 2007, 17:33
Yes I liked it and I will keep on .Thank you :hug: