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What am i talking about ?
or have i forgotten reading
BEFORE IT'S TOO LATE (smarter,i think)
that's all i can see..keep writing;)

A DESCRIPTIVE PARAGRAPH by LEE 19


REMAINS OF ROMAN EMPIRE

I advice you to go and visit Ephesus.It is a wonderful historical place. Everyday many tourists go there to see remains of Roman buildings. Last year, I decided to go that historical city.I obtained some information about Ephesus over the internet, I visited this historical place with my friends. It was an ancient Roman city, in which Roman people had lived long years under the reign of the empire. When we reached there, we saw many interesting and amazing remainings and we were surprised. I took their photos and read their explanations with my friends. It has popular buildings such as Celcius Library, Amphi-theatre, temples, graveyards and museums.It was a beautiful day.Everybody must see Ephesus, it is a great place to visit.

good coherence and cohesion:)

Narrative (ödev)


That was a sunny Sunday, just like the name itself. You could see no cloud up there, I mean; the air was limpid and shiny. However, people didn't seem to be happy with their bitter shouts. As a contrast scene to the brilliant day, there was a great mess in the middle of the road. I finally learned that there had happened a disastrous accident from the old man whom I asked about the matter.
Suddenly,I heard somebody falling.When I looked back,I realized that the one who had fallen was the old man himself whom I had talked just a few minutes before.Seemingly,he hadn't been able to watch that much tragedy and had been afflicted by a heart attack.Thank God,I had some knowledge about first aid and I reached near him as fast as I could and told him to stay with me.He tried to raise his hand with all his strength but didn't seem to be successful at all.Unfortunately,as soon as I realized he had fallen death in my arms,I got petrified with astonishment and fear.First,I thought of leaving him there and to go away immediately.But my conscience didn't allow me,and I put my hand into his pockets.I found a mobile phone inside,then started to browse the names and numbers.There was a "my dear" and I decided to call that dear.The dear answered the call by saying "hi daddy".Everything stopped for a brief moment and I didn't know what to say to that lovely voice which was ready to talk to the father."Err..." I said, and she seemed to get suprised as far as I could guess.I asked her if she could come to the place where the accident had happened and gave address to her.She only breathed excitedly for a few seconds and I told her that I couldn't explain anything on the phone.She accepted and I started to wait with the poor corpse.I had lost my interest in the accident and started to move him to a corner where nobody could realize us.I didn't want to share any more drama with the people around.It had already been a horrible day and seemingly it was going to go on in the police station and hospital.When she reached beside us,she got locked for a while.I told her not to cause much trouble in the most gentle way I could do,and begun to tell everything her.She was looking to her dear daddy with her moist eyes and swelled stomach.She seemed to be eight or nine-month-pregnant.It could be dangerous to leave her with stress,I suggested her to call a cab and go to the nearest hospital for her and her father.We reached the hospital and the progress took start.After having relationship with doctors,policemen,tragedies with his family,finally I was at the old man's house at about three a.m. Everybody was really sorry but they didn't forget to thank me for not leaving him there all alone.I said it had been my humanity duty.
After the terrible event,the years and months passed.The old man's family still calls me and invites me to their home from time to time.They are so grateful to me that even I suggested the baby boy's name to be his dear granddady's name.Now,Charley is a ten-year-old lovely boy.The last time I've seen him was on the Thanksgiving Day,and he has got used to call me brother although I'm too old to be his brother,however I'm not complaining about it.

(Ps: The narrative is a work of my imagination from a man's eyes)